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    Red face Presumbly the vacany has already been filled up ....

    Presumbly the vacany has already been filled up by the time I send this letter, my enthusiasm and determination to continue my dancing career urge me to value this opportunity to introduce myself......

    Is the above structure OK?
    How can I make it better?

    Thanks


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    Re: Presumbly the vacany has already been filled up ....

    Quote Originally Posted by Ju View Post
    Presumbly the vacancy has already been filled up by the time I send this letter, but my enthusiasm and determination to continue my dancing career impel me to take this opportunity to introduce myself......

    Is the above structure OK?
    How can I make it better?

    Thanks
    ...

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