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    Question usage of "these"

    is this sentence correct:

    "our religious school co-director Nancy ---------- wishes to give these information regarding the passing of her father Dr. Richard ------

    following that sentence we have the description of where to send flowers donation etc

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    Re: usage of "these"

    It would sound better to say, "wishes to announce the following information regarding the passing...."

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