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    #1

    Barbarous

    Could you please fine tune the word "barbarous" in the following sentence? Thanks a million.

    Economics uses barbarous and intimidating terms like macroeconomics or gross national product.

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    #2

    Re: Barbarous

    It sounds a bit excessive to me- I'd just delete it.

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    Re: Barbarous

    Quote Originally Posted by Tdol View Post
    It sounds a bit excessive to me- I'd just delete it.
    Thanks.

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    #4

    Re: Barbarous

    (I wonder whether it would sound better if you changed "or" to "and".)

    MrP

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