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    Smile sentence confusion!

    [FONT='Times New Roman','serif']can u plz correct the sentence below![/FONT]
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    [FONT='Times New Roman','serif']Both young people and adults spend much of their time playing online games and visiting chat rooms both of which time investments that ultimately result in studentís receiving poor grades and in adultís losing their jobs. [/FONT]


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    Re: sentence confusion!

    Young people and adults spend much of their time playing online games and visiting chat rooms, both of which time investments ultimately result in students receiving poor grades and in adults losing their jobs.

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