In my opinion, you're very good at writing. I wish I could right as well as you.
However, I have some comments:
1- Being rich and being poor has no meaning at all.
I think it's better to say "Being rich OR being poor has no meaning at all" or "Either you're rich or you're poor has no meaning at all".
2- The streets are wide enough for all the massive cars. &
There is no traffic at all.........
I think there's contrast between them.
3- You can see a lot of people riding bicycles instead of driving their cars to the work.
You shouldn't have used the article "the".
Student or Learner