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    short passage for Year 2 students

    A very short passage meant for Year 2 students. Please edit it for me. Any suggestions to improve the passage are welcome. Thanks in advance.

    Lily and Jill were walking home together after school. They were neighbours.

    The sky was very dark. Soon it began to rain heavily. They ran to the bus stop to take shelter there. Then they waited and waited till the rain stopped. After about an hour when the rain had stopped, they walked home together.

    Soon they reached Lily’s house and they said goodbye to each other.
    Last edited by kohyoongliat; 28-Mar-2007 at 17:33.

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    Re: short passage for Year 2 students

    Lily and Jill, two neighbours, were walking home together after school. The sky was very dark, and soon it began to rain heavily. They ran to the bus stop to take shelter there. Then they waited and waited till the rain stopped. When the rain stopped about an hour later, they walked home together.

    Soon they reached Lilyís house and they said goodbye to each other.

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