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    • Join Date: Jul 2005
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    proofreading

    Hi,

    could you please proofread the following sentence:

    The provider shall be obliged to provide first-grade support to the client in respect of the program stated, as a subject of the first-grade support, in specification no. 328, which forms an integral part of this agreement, under the conditions and in the manner stipulated in this agreement.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka

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    Re: proofreading

    Quote Originally Posted by Hanka View Post
    Hi,

    could you please proofread the following sentence:

    The provider shall be obliged to provide first-grade support to the client in respect of the program stated, as a subject of the first-grade support, in specification no. 328, which forms an integral part of this agreement, under the conditions and in the manner stipulated in this agreement.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka
    Why not change it do this? It's easier for everyone:

    You have to help us in this according to your agreement (spec. no 328).

    Otherwise it looks great!

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