[quote=kohyoongliat;165076]Could someone please edit this passage meant for Yr 2 students for me? Thanks in advance.
Today is Davidís first day at school. He listens attentively to what the teachers teach him. tell
When it is recess, David queues up to buy fried noodles, his favourite food. There are many other pupils in the canteen queuing up to buy food from different stalls.
After David has bought fried noodles, he sits at the bench to enjoy the food.
After he has eaten, he returns to his classroom to wait for recess to be over. When /quote]
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