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    editing of passage

    Could you please edit the passage meant for Year 2 students for me? Thank you very much.

    Once a dog was walking near a river when it saw its refection in the water. It saw another dog with a bone in its mouth. It wanted the other bone when he had already one in its month. When it opened its month and tried to get the other dog’s bone, his bone fell into the water. It was very sad, but it did not understand why the other dog got its bone instead.

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    Re: editing of passage

    Once, a dog while crossing a small rivulet through a thin wooden beam connecting the banks happened to see its reflection in the water. Curious as she was, she looked into the water to see her own reflection; another dog with a bone in her mouth. The dog was greedy and bit foolish and she badly wanted the other bone. The foolish one opened her mouth to grab the ‘other’ bone, but, in the process lost the real one, that slipped and fell into the water. Foolish as she was, she never understood why the ‘other’ dog managed to get the bone that slipped from her mouth.

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