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    • Join Date: Jul 2005
    • Posts: 928
    #1

    proofreading

    Hi,

    could you please proofread the following sentence:

    We propose consistent inspection of leaving persons and the material taken out of the object by means of a metal detector.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka


    • Join Date: Mar 2007
    • Posts: 58
    #2

    Re: proofreading

    Hi try this "Persons leaving the premises and any objects/materials carried shall be consistently inspected by a metal detector". have a good day...

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