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    Is it correct to write like this? Please advise,thx teachers

    Some of us played games and some of us took a nap.

    If it is not correct, how should I correct the sentence above?

    Thank you, teachers! ^o^

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    Re: Is it correct to write like this? Please advise,thx teac

    Quote Originally Posted by Helped Wanted
    Some of us played games and some of us took a nap.
    Yes, that is good. However, I suggest using a comma after games. You could also say:
    • Some of us played games, and some of us napped.

    :)

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    Thank you soooo much for helping, teacher Ronbee! ^o^

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    You're very welcome.

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