" Dear Sirs,
I am writting (writing ) to protest about the traffic situation in our town. Many people have problems with public transportation (transport might also be ok but I think transportation sounds better).Nevertheless,the company of Slovac bus transport is not deal with it (is not to be dealt with ).
First of all.the Sad (what exactly does "Sad" means? Is it the name of the bus company?) says taht (that ) they have not got (don't have ) enough money for improving
the public transportation .
However (you're not really contradicting your previous idea. If they have no money, you they can't do anything about it. You could use "however" if you thought they were lying to you. For example: "However I know for a fact that their profit increased by 10% this ver year), This being said , in my opinion (no need for that) the traffic channels are often delayed and
we need confirm these traffic chanels mainly in the morning and in the afternoon. (I don't understand what you mean. Are you saying that there's so many delays that you have to check in the morning and in the afternoon to find out the exact time table for the buses?)
I'll stop here for now. I'll continue later.
Despite,that the Sad have not got enough money it is necessary to acquire
government subsidies.The next problem is that buses are very old,rusty and
overcrowded.They are not comfortable and conform for disabled persons.
I think,if we get government subsidies,we will change our public transport.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Student or Learner