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    need urgent help!

    Hi

    Would someone be so kind and correct my sentences?

    The climatic function of the forest[title]
    The forest! Here is a notion and a reality that have followed man since the far beginnings of human/man`s existence. Due to the structure, density and dimensions of the trees, the forest favourably influences the natural environment and, especially the climatic factors. These influences consists of :
    1. the decreasing of the radiations
    2. the influence on temperature
    3. the influence on the atmospheric humidity
    4. the influences on the quantity and frequency of rainfalls
    4. building of the most efficient biological barriers against flood flow.
    5. the favourable influence of the normal flow of the rivers.

    Thank you very much in advance


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    Re: need urgent help!

    Quote Originally Posted by teia_petrescu View Post
    Hi

    Would someone be so kind and correct my sentences?

    The climatic function of the forest[title]
    The forest! Here is a notion and a reality that have followed man since the far beginnings of human/man`s existence. Due to the structure, density and dimensions of the trees, the forest favourably influences the natural environment and, especially the climatic factors. These influences consists of :
    1. the decreasing of the radiations
    2. the influence on temperature
    3. the influence on the atmospheric humidity
    4. the influences on the quantity and frequency of rainfalls
    4. building of the most efficient biological barriers against flood flow.
    5. the favourable influence of the normal flow of the rivers.

    Thank you very much in advance
    1: Remove the comma after "and" in the first paragraph.
    2: If you are talking about forest(s) in general, then I would omit "the".
    3: on your numbered points, remove "the" (apart from the biological barriers and the normal flow of rivers) - again, you are talking of generalities.
    34: numbering sequence wrong.

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    Re: need urgent help!

    Thank you very much Anglika . I appreciate your help.

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