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    editing of passage

    Could someone please edit this short passage for me? Thanks in advance.

    No animals are as smart as people. However, some are very intelligent. Apes, monkeys, dolphins and dogs can learn many things. Animals such as clams, crabs, insects and worms are the least intelligent of all. They can hardly be trained. Some animals cannot learn anything!


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    Re: editing of passage

    Animals are not as clever as human beings. Animals, such as apes monkeys, dolphins and dogs are intelligent, and they can learn many things. But, creatures like clams, crabs, worms and other insects are least intelligent, thus they can be hardly trained.
    Some animals, however, cannot learn anything.

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