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    #1

    Smile sentence rehrase help

    Is this a better rephrase:
    1Sudden power-off may damage the file system, or even cause the failure of the system reboot.
    Rephrased:
    A sudden disruption of power supply may damage the file system, or may even cause failure of the system to reboot.
    2. This section describes how to plan the installation path for the software of the N2000 UMS
    rephrased:
    This section describes how to plan the path for installing the N2000 UMS software.


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    Re: sentence rehrase help

    Quote Originally Posted by hemmin View Post
    Is this a better rephrase:
    1Sudden power-off may damage the file system, or even cause the failure of the system reboot.
    Rephrased:
    A sudden disruption of power supply may damage the file system, or may even cause failure of the system to reboot.
    2. This section describes how to plan the installation path for the software of the N2000 UMS
    rephrased:
    This section describes how to plan the path for installing the N2000 UMS software.
    blackout - Definitions from Dictionary.com


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    #3

    Re: sentence rehrase help

    Quote Originally Posted by svartnik View Post
    not able to understand.


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    Re: sentence rehrase help

    [quote=hemmin;170562] Is this a better rephrase:
    1Sudden power-off may damage the file system, or even cause the failure of the system reboot.
    Rephrased:

    A sudden disruption of the power supply may damage the file system, or may even cause failure of the system reboot. This would be an alternative. "system reboot" is a technical term.


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