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    Please help me

    I sat on my suitcase as the Swiss train carried me to a meeting I'd dreamed of for two decades. At the end of the journey waited Anne Frank's father, Otto, with whom I had corresponded since I was fourteen.

    I am rephrasing the above highlighted sentence according to my knowledge. Please see whether I am right or wrong.

    When the train reached my destination, there Anne Frank's father, Otto, waited for me to receive me, with whom .....................


    Am I right?

    Please help me.

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    #2

    Re: Please help me

    The 'with whom' part should come earlier IMO.

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    Re: Please help me

    Quote Originally Posted by user_gary View Post
    I sat on my suitcase as the Swiss train carried me to a meeting I'd dreamed of for two decades. At the end of the journey waited Anne Frank's father, Otto, with whom I had corresponded since I was fourteen.

    I am rephrasing the above highlighted sentence according to my knowledge. Please see whether I am right or wrong.

    When the train reached my destination, there Anne Frank's father, Otto, waited for me to receive me, with whom .....................


    Am I right?

    Please help me.
    Hello User Gary,

    When the train reached my destination, I found Anne Frank's father, Otto, with whom I had corresponded since I was fourteen, waiting to receive me.

    Fieldmouse

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