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    #1

    After work

    If you see any mistakes, please let me have your comments. Thanks in advance.

    Both my wife and I work for the same broadcasing company. After work, before we go home , we pick up our son at the kindergarden.

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    Re: After work

    It's a beautifully written sentence. My suggestions are in black font. (There shouldn't be a space (_) after the word home).

    Both my wife and I work for the same broadcasting company. After work, before we go home_, we pick up our son at the kindergarten.

    All the best.

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