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    #1

    Smile filled with knowledge

    My pupil wrote:
    I always enjoy reading books all day in the very bookstore filled with knowledge including science, historics, and reference to music and art.

    My suggestion:
    I always enjoy reading books all day long in the very bookstore full of science and history knowledge as well as reference books on music and art.

    Correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.


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    #2

    Re: filled with knowledge

    Well... His sentenece isn't that logic.
    Sentence should be changed a tad, but you have changed the whole context of his sentence...


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    #3

    Re: filled with knowledge

    Quote Originally Posted by angliholic View Post
    My pupil wrote:
    I always enjoy reading books all day in the very bookstore filled with knowledge including science, historics, and reference to music and art.

    My suggestion:
    I always enjoy reading books all day long in the very bookstore full of science and history knowledge as well as reference books on music and art.

    Correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.
    I'm not happy with "the very bookstore" - unless it is the name of a bookstore. I would probably rephrase this :

    I always enjoy reading books all day long in the bookstore, which is filled with knowledge about science, history, music and art.

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    #4

    Re: filled with knowledge

    Thanks, Ben and Anglika.

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