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    Red face Please correct my business letter

    Please correct it


    Hello Mr.John

    Well and Wish the same from you. This is regarding Spider Instrument.
    As per our last telephonic discussion, you told that your financial department will contact us for further process.
    Still I didnt receive any call from them. Kindly update me the status about that.
    If it is possible, please give me your financial department contacts.
    I am so sorry to distrub you again and again. Kindly help me out this issue.

    Thanks for your kind attention.

    Regards,
    Sdhmech

  2. #2

    Re: Please correct my business letter

    Hello Mr.John

    I am well and wish the same for you. This letter is regarding Spider Instrument.
    As per our last telephone discussion, you told me that your financial department would contact us for further processing.
    Still, I did not receive a telephone call from them. Kindly update me on the status of a reply.
    If it is possible, please give me your financial department's contacts.
    I am so sorry to disturb you repeatedly. Kindly help me out with this issue.

    Thank you for your kind attention.

    with regards,
    Sdhmech

  3. #3

    Less formal and more direct yet pleasant and effective

    Dear John,

    Hope all is going well with you. I am writing you today in regards to Spider Instrument. In our last conversation you told me that your financial department would contact us. I have not received a call from them yet.

    Please let me know what is going on and if possible give me your financial department contact information.

    Your help with this situation will be greatly appreciated.

    Thanks for your kind attention.

    Regards,
    Sdhmech

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