Student or Learner
They are so na´ves to go on dreaming, even after their failure, about a success that never comes, about worldwide theatres longing for them and also about the beautiful women they could seduce if they were famous..... .
1. is this sentence correct?
2. the last part could be re-written : "...also about the beutiful women they could seduce were they famous"?
na´ves - na´ve
worldwide theatres- theatres worldwide