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    • Join Date: Sep 2006
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    #1

    how can i improve this sentence

    This section describes how to troubleshoot the failure to generate a multicast group.
    My doubt is can we troubleshoot a failure?
    How can I improve this sentence?


    • Join Date: May 2007
    • Posts: 33
    #2

    Re: how can i improve this sentence

    Hi, I like this version better. Troubleshooting, to me, means talking about all the possibilities leading up to the failure and how to avoid them, so the failure does not occur.

    This section focuses on the failure to generate a multicast group

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