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    to attract/attracting

    The band took part in the Festival with the song "Beloved" attracting the attention on them as a band of a standing level

    The band took part in the Festival with "Beloved" a song that attracted the attention on them as.....

    Which sentence (if any) makes sence?


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    Re: to attract/attracting

    Neither sentence is corect, because we attract attention to ourselves, not on ourselves. Also, I would assume the band already had the attention of the crowd or they (the audience) would not have known what song was being played.



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