Student or Learner
The band took part in the Festival with the song "Beloved" attracting the attention on them as a band of a standing level
The band took part in the Festival with "Beloved" a song that attracted the attention on them as.....
Which sentence (if any) makes sence?
Neither sentence is corect, because we attract attention to ourselves, not on ourselves. Also, I would assume the band already had the attention of the crowd or they (the audience) would not have known what song was being played.