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    • Join Date: Dec 2006
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    plz check a short essay

    20.3 Write the brief message on how you spend
    The free time

    I prefer to my spend time outdoor whenever possible. It is more interesting and relaxing than staying indoor. Being outdoor gives me the oppurnity to see sights, try new things and meet new people to go cinema, to theatre, to live concert. When I am outdoor, I have the oppurnity to see new sights might go to a park, go swimming, and take a hike in a new place. The flowers change with season to see .if I m indoor I like to read books and plays computer and watch movie on net.


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    Re: plz check a short essay

    Quote Originally Posted by ghai_prince13 View Post
    20.3 Write the brief message on how you spend
    The free time

    I prefer to my spend time outdoor whenever possible. It is more interesting and relaxing than staying indoor. Being outdoor gives me the oppurnity to see sights, try new things and meet new people to go cinema, to theatre, to live concert. When I am outdoor, I have the oppurnity to see new sights might go to a park, go swimming, and take a hike in a new place. The flowers change with season to see .if I m indoor I like to read books and plays computer and watch movie on net.
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