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A scary night
It was a dark and stormy night in August four years ago. My parents had been on holiday in France, so I was staying alone at home.
It was nothing new for me to stay alone at home, so, at first, I was not scared.
But then it happened. I was lying in front of the television when the phone rang. I answered the phone without any fear, but suddenly I was scared. The voice on the phone sounded horrible and said that someone is going to kill me tonight. After that I frightened so much that I hid behind a cupboard.
A few minutes later the doorbell rang and somebody was knocking on a window and shouted: "Come out little girl!"
I donít know why, but I got the courage to open the front door. My heart was beating so much. Suddenly someone was jumping out from behind a tree, it was my father. From that moment on I knew that he was joking with me, but the only thing I did was burst into laughter.
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