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do u think this sentence is correct??? instead of that old one
The action of the story moves forward when, on a particular evening, Donavan tells Bonaparte that the Englishmen are not just prisoners but also hostages, and that they will be executed if the English harm the Irish prisoners
Last edited by jamalbajwa; 10-Jun-2007 at 22:37.
I didn't see the old one, but this one is fine.