Not too many errors!A good example to consider is the Fathersí Day commercial of [for] Jumbo supermarkets that advertises a set of t-shirts for fathers and sons. In this television advertise [this is the verb; you need the nound]we see a man driving his son to a school ball. Later, surprisingly, the kid request his father to drive him to the entrance of the school and finally, before leaving, he hugs him goodbye. On the pavement, all his school mates stare at this unusual behaviour in amazement and suddenly, they start applauding him. The boy, feeling great pride of his action, jumps in the air and finally, we listen to a voice-over saying that there are no possibilities that something of the sort happens to an ordinary father. However, sons and fathers can always share nice t-shirts.
I believe there are many mistakes in here, but I cant find them :/
Any comments on my grammar mistakes will be more than appreciated.
Thanks in advanced! :)
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