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  1. Newbie
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    • Join Date: Jun 2007
    • Posts: 4
    #1

    I will really appreciate your help!!!

    Hi, this is my resume. actually, it is pretty messy.
    but pls, correct this. I really need your help.
    coz I have been unemployeed for about 3months so far.
    HElP ME!!!



    OBJECTIVE
    n Forward-thinking sales assistant seeking a position utilizing my skills and my academic background in fashion.
    n Professional with 3 years of experience in sales assistant and retail assistant. Strategic and creative thinker
    with effective communication and managing skills.
    n Ability to promote teamwork and develop relationships with clients and team member.

    EMPLOYMENT HISTORY
    Hanama Collection Co., Ltd:
    Operate a business under franchise of Valley Girl Co.,Ltd
    Targeted young age woman
    Manage low price garments and accessories

    Retailing Assistant – Sydney, Australia 09.2005 ~ 02.2007
    l Created and corrected data on FUTURA (retail program)
    l Communication – mailed and phoned suppliers and sales assistants to provide information and direction
    l Analyzed weekly data and distribute goods to each branch
    l Inspection – inspected goods by color, condition, barcode, price and inform problems to senior manager
    l Organized document – filled documents and photos
    l Classified and packed season off goods
    l Collected and amended invoices
    l Trained new employees

    Storia Trading Co., Ltd: Trading agency
    Operated a business with exclusive license of ‘RODEL’, ‘VISCONF’ (ITALY)
    Targeted middle and old age woman
    Managed high price woven jacket and wool, fur coat

    Agent (Sales assistant) – Seoul, Korea 04.2001 ~ 06.2003
    l Market and Price research
    - Observed and drew item designs in market
    - Researched prices of items as a mystery shopper
    l Support developing design - drew details of developing item and explain modifications to Italy vendor
    l Support Customer (buyer)
    - Informed conditions and procedures of import such as the date of depart and arrival, the due date of remittance and document requirements for entry.
    - Responded customer’s needs as provide accurate price, amounts and
    relevant fabrics for selected garments.
    l Communicated and collaborated with forwarding agency and custom agency.
    l Display and organize show room - displayed and organized S/S, F/W season samples regularly
    l Organize documents and data - created diagrams of all samples and created basic data for order amount and stock
    l Manage complain and problem – responded simple problems as provide possible solutions with positive attitude


    TECHNICAL SKILLS
    I have intermediate grade computer skill such as Ms - Word, PowerPoint, Excel and I certificated in Senior First Aid. Also, I have skills in visual art such as drawing and painting. Any challenges that I might be confronted with are truly welcomed.

    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • Laos

    • Join Date: Nov 2002
    • Posts: 57,833
    #2

    Re: I will really appreciate your help!!!

    in sales assistant and retail assistant- these are jobs so it should be 'as a sales...'
    team member- members
    Operate a business- past tense (same with 'Manage')?
    distribute goods- past tense
    inform problems to senior manager- informed senior manager of any problems
    Organized document - plural
    middle and old age woman- only one woman?
    jacket and wool, fur coat- jackets, and wool and fur coats
    of developing item- plural??
    Italy vendor- Italian
    date of depart- departure (despatching/shipping?)
    Responded customer’s- to customers'
    as provide- by providing
    l Organize documents and data - created diagrams of all samples and created basic data for order amount and stock- past tense
    l Manage complain and problem – responded simple problems as provide possible solutions with positive attitude- past tense
    computer skill - skills

  2. Newbie
    Student or Learner

    • Join Date: Jun 2007
    • Posts: 4
    #3

    Re: I will really appreciate your help!!!

    thank you so much^^
    god will bless u~~~

    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • Laos

    • Join Date: Nov 2002
    • Posts: 57,833
    #4

    Re: I will really appreciate your help!!!

    Good luck.

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