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    Please help, it's very urgent

    there are two sentences from my thesis I have to present to my supervisors tomorrow, I just forgot to check them, please, could you do it for me?

    However other european banks’ expenditures incurred to implement new technologies are not enough in relation to the dizzyingly increasing number of Internet banking users. Banks are not catching up on adjusting their products and services to be available online.

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    Re: Please help, it's very urgent

    Sentence one has a comma missing and a capitalization error. Sentence two is OK.


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    Re: Please help, it's very urgent

    thank you very much, I thought it would be the second sentence to be incorrect as I wasn't sure as to that phrasal verb, so 'however,' and 'European'. Thank you once again.


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    Re: Please help, it's very urgent

    Quote Originally Posted by Szymon View Post
    there are two sentences from my thesis I have to present to my supervisors tomorrow, I just forgot to check them, please, could you do it for me?

    However, other European banks’ expenditures incurred to implement new technologies are not enough in relation to the dizzyingly increasing number of Internet banking users. Banks are not catching up on [with] adjusting their products and services to be available online. [online availability]
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