Student or Learner
could you please proofread the following text:
For the enterprises, it is useful to ensure a real feedback and questions concerning the relevant decisions. Positive and negative feedback information offers the possibility to build a platform for further development using this knowledge.
Thank you very much.
Useful - benefic, profitable, expedient??
a prompt feedback, maybe?
questions adressing the relevant issues? (concerning means 'about' the issue, while addressing means grappling with the issue)
information - redundant?
what knowledge are you talking about at the end??
The information / knowledge (derived) from positive and negative feedback offers the possibility to build a platform for further development.
Last edited by bianca; 23-Jun-2007 at 10:01.