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    proofreading

    Hi,

    could you please proofread the following text:

    For the enterprises, it is useful to ensure a real feedback and questions concerning the relevant decisions. Positive and negative feedback information offers the possibility to build a platform for further development using this knowledge.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka

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    Re: proofreading

    Quote Originally Posted by Hanka View Post
    Hi,

    could you please proofread the following text:

    For the enterprises, it is useful to ensure a real feedback and questions concerning the relevant decisions. Positive and negative feedback information offers the possibility to build a platform for further development using this knowledge.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka
    Just a couple of questions:

    Useful - benefic, profitable, expedient??

    a prompt feedback, maybe?

    questions adressing the relevant issues? (concerning means 'about' the issue, while addressing means grappling with the issue)

    information - redundant?

    what knowledge are you talking about at the end??


    The information / knowledge (derived) from positive and negative feedback offers the possibility to build a platform for further development.
    Last edited by bianca; 23-Jun-2007 at 10:01.

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