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    proofreading again

    Hi,

    could you please proofread the following:

    During coaching and training, the company specifically concentrates on the care for qualified employees.
    With us, you will find out that your qualification and responsibility for tasks in the modern labour market solely depend on you.
    The most important elements of “process planning” will be developed (OR elaborated OR worked out OR processed????) for you.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka

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    #2

    Re: proofreading again

    Quote Originally Posted by Hanka View Post
    Hi,

    could you please proofread the following:

    During coaching and training, the company concentrates on the care for qualified employees mainly / only??.
    With us, you will find out that (your) both qualification and responsibility for tasks in the modern labour market depend entirely / exclusively on you.
    The most important elements of “process planning” will be developed (OR elaborated OR worked out OR processed????) (drawn up/ set up) for you.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka
    My suggestions, I'm not sure they're OK though...
    Last edited by bianca; 23-Jun-2007 at 15:06.

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