I would like you to evaluate my accent please, to tell me what I should change and improve etc.
I am trying to make it sound american.
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Thanks in advance
Well, I believe your accent does sound American. Maybe even too much American.
What I mean is that it seems a little forced.
But I think you're on the right track.
Teachers and native-speakers will specifically tell you what you need to do in order to improve it more.