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    Please help me to amend my english resume

    Attach is my english resume,can you kindly help me to amend it,please?If you can give me some suggestion about it,that will be much appreciated!Thanks a lot!



    Resume

    Name:Alan
    Tel:135********
    E-mail:EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead

    OBJECTIVE
    Seeking a position in Shipping

    SKILLS:
    1、Good command of English/Mandarin and MS Office software (Excel, Word, PowerPoint & Outlook) ;
    2、Good written and spoken in English, spoken Cantonese preferred; CET-4
    3、Good interpersonal skills

    EDUCATION
    From 2002.09 to 2005.07,◊◊◊ University, major in International Economics and Trade

    EXPERIENCE

    From 2006.10 to now ***Co.,Ltd Marketing Dept.Shipping Coordinator

    Responsibility:
    1、To make the space reservation and handle the issuance of shipping orders with carriers/forwarders;
    2、Confirm the delivery date with the follow-up Dept., Issued Shipment Advice;
    3、Co-ordinate with trucking company on cargoes pick up;
    4、Contact with the customs clearing agent,and provide the doc for customs clearance;
    5、Contact with the carriers/forwarders,provide the shipping informations,then arrange the payment for shipment fee,and pick up the bill of lading;
    6、Proceed shipping documents including FORM A/packing list/inviove,and so on;
    7、Submit the doc with the L/C request to the bank.

    Achievement:
    1、acquainted with the special request of new customer to shipment and document, get the compliment of the company supervisor and customer;
    2、Loading 70 containers per month smoothly.

    From 2005.7 to 2006.8 ◊◊◊Co.,Ltd Sales Dept. Shipping Coordinator

    Responsibility:
    1、Contact with carriers/forwarders for booking space;
    2、Auditing & amend the L/C;
    3、Tracking the purchase order ,check the goods whether have achieved the orderís request;
    4、Contact with our logistic dep. on cargoes pick up;
    5、Print the shipping mark, proceed shipping documents including invioce/packing list/FORM A/ certificate of fumigation,and so on;
    6、Hand over the doc with the L/C request to the bank ;
    7、Create our departmentís weekly/monthly report.

    Achievement:
    1、Loading 60 containers per month smoothly;
    2、Build up the new fumigation system;
    3、Make our dept. pass smoothly to The Internal audit & external audit of ISO

    INTEREST:Travel, music, play ping-pong.

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    Re: Please help me to amend my english resume

    You have written reponsibility twice. Why? either merge them which will not look good so give the prior one new heading. i guess.


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    Re: Please help me to amend my english resume

    Quote Originally Posted by sting View Post
    You have written reponsibility twice. Why? either merge them which will not look good so give the prior one new heading. i guess.

    There are two different jobs with two company.
    Last edited by alan13202; 05-Jul-2007 at 10:37.

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    Re: Please help me to amend my english resume

    Quote Originally Posted by alan13202 View Post
    Attach is my english resume,can you kindly help me to amend it,please?If you can give me some suggestion about it,that will be much appreciated!Thanks a lot!
    do you mean to 'emend' it?


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    Re: Please help me to amend my english resume

    Quote Originally Posted by alan13202 View Post
    Attach is myEnglish resume. Can you kindly help me to amend it, please? If you can give me some suggestions about it, that will be much appreciated! Thanks a lot!



    Resume

    Name:Alan
    Tel:135********
    E-mail:EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead

    OBJECTIVE
    Seeking a position in Shipping

    SKILLS:
    1、Good command of English/Mandarin and MS Office software (Excel, Word, PowerPoint & Outlook) ;[If you are putting your points in numbered/bulleted lists, you no not need punctuation]
    2、Good written and spoken in English, spoken Cantonese preferred; CET-4 "Good written and spoken English"
    3、Good interpersonal skills

    EDUCATION
    From 2002.09 to 2005.07,◊◊◊ University, major in International Economics and Trade [Did you receive a degree? If you did, then give its title]

    EXPERIENCE

    From 2006.10 to now [It is usual to put the date]***Co.,Ltd Marketing Dept.Shipping Coordinator

    Responsibility"...ies"
    1、To make the space reservation and handle the issuance of shipping orders with carriers/forwarders; To reserve space with carriers/forwarders and issue shipping orders
    2、Confirm the delivery date with the follow-up Dept., Issued Shipment Advice;
    3、Co-ordinate with trucking company on cargoes cargo pick up;
    4、Contact with the customs clearing agent,and provide the doc [Do not use abbreviations] for customs clearance;
    5、Contact with the carriers/forwarders,provide the shipping informations,then arrange the payment for shipment fee,and pick up the bill of lading; [Always follow punctuation with a space] {{providing... arranging... picking up...}}
    6、Proceed Process shipping documents including FORM A/packing list/inviove,and so on;
    7、Submit the doc with the L/C request to the bank.

    Achievements
    1、Acquainted with the special request of new customer to shipment and document, get the compliment of the company supervisor and customer;
    2、Loading 70 containers per month smoothly.Ensured that 70 containers per month were loaded/shipped smoothly

    From 2005.7 to 2006.8 ◊◊◊Co.,Ltd Sales Dept. Shipping Coordinator

    Responsibilities:
    1、Contact with carriers/forwarders for booking space;
    2、Auditing & amending the L/C; [Do not use abbreviations]
    3、Tracking the purchase order [purchase orders],check [and checking whether] the goods whether have achieved the orderís request;
    4、Contact with the logistics dep. about cargo pick up;
    5、Print the shipping mark, proceed [process] shipping documents including invioce/packing list/FORM A/ certificate of fumigation,and so on;
    6、Hand over the doc with the L/C request to the bank ;
    7、Create our departmentís weekly/monthly report.

    Achievements:
    1、Loading 60 containers per month smoothly;
    2、Building up the new fumigation system;
    3、Make our dept. pass smoothly to The Internal audit & external audit of ISO

    INTEREST:Travel, music, playing ping-pong.
    1. Use dates as normal = month/year = July 2005 - Aug. 2006
    2. Make sure you have a space following punctuation.
    3. Never use abbreviations in this kind of document.


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    Re: Please help me to amend my english resume

    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
    1. Use dates as normal = month/year = July 2005 - Aug. 2006
    2. Make sure you have a space following punctuation.
    3. Never use abbreviations in this kind of document.
    Thank you so much! Appreciate your help.

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