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    Editing Assistance

    These kinds of (not this kind of) cartridges in general are not any deferent than all others....

    The source of household water for the most rural areas of South Carolina, especially, Orangeburg County is (not are) the local well.

    The GC oven ramping program was (not were) as following: ......

    Although this cartridge is looking cleaner, however, it contains organic....

    We are unable to ascertain the depth of various wells in most cases, however,those....

    The instrumentation for testing VOC (consist (or consists) of a .....

    Thanks for your help!

    Cindy


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    Re: Editing Assistance

    Quote Originally Posted by crussell View Post
    These kinds of (not this kind of) cartridges in general are not any deferent than all others....

    The source of household water for the most rural areas of South Carolina, especially, Orangeburg County, is (not are) the local well.

    The GC oven ramping program was (not were) as following: ......

    Although this cartridge is looking cleaner, however, it contains organic....

    We are unable to ascertain the depth of various wells in most cases, however,those....

    The instrumentation for testing VOC (consist (or consists) of a .....

    Thanks for your help!

    Cindy
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    I would break the sentences including "however" into two sentences, starting the second one with "However"


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    Re: Editing Assistance

    Thank you.

    Can you say: this (or that) kind of cartridges?

    Thanks so much!


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    Re: Editing Assistance

    Yes.

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