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    Could someone please help me fix any grammar and punctuation mistakes in the following:


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    2. A web site is only the first step to a successful web presence. You now have a new job of keeping the content up-to-date so visitors don't easily lose interest and go to a competitor that offers frequent updates, or new features. Keeping your new web site updated is not a difficult task, but it is time consuming and does require special training to ensure that nothing breaks in the process. We can quickly and efficiently update any segment of your web site on request for a small fee.

    3. If your computer is running slower than usual, rebooting itself, or just not working then it might be time for a check-up. Much like a person, a computer should be examined by a professional to ensure everything is in order. We can solve almost any computer-related problem. [company name] has even been known to fix computers that other professionals in the field said could not be fixed.


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    Re: Need Help

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    Could someone please help me fix any grammar and punctuation mistakes in the following:


    1. Whether you need to make a solid first impression, your current site redesigned to outpace the competition, an eye-catching layout or the latest web technologies, we can help. We can create dynamic database-driven websites, blog systems, chat rooms, flash banners, RSS feeds, security features and much more! You will recieve a professional, attractive, and functional high-impact website with a low-impact price tag.

    2. A web site is only the first step to a successful web presence. You now have a new job [the job] of keeping the content up-to-date so visitors don't easily lose interest and go to a competitor that [who] offers frequent updates or new features. Keeping your new website updated is not a difficult task, but it is time-consuming and does require special training to ensure that nothing breaks [fails] in the process. We can quickly and efficiently update any segment of your website on request, for a small fee.

    3. If your computer is running slower than usual, rebooting itself, or just not working, then it might be time for a check-up. Much like a person, a computer should be examined by a professional to ensure everything is in order. We can solve almost any computer-related problem. [company name] has even been known to fix computers that other professionals in the field said could not be fixed.
    Otherwise looks good.

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