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    help is what i need

    Hi all, i have been writting a resumé and i have had many doubts. could you analyze these sentences and tell me whether they sound good and how i could improve them.


    Objective


    A job in a dynamic environment, which will offer me the opportunity to get in touch with different cultures, development of an international career and a global workplace experience.

    Profile

    - Good written and spoken english, and seeking to learn other languages. (I hope that it is true)
    - Professional committed and responsible.
    - Able to deal with different kind of people.
    - Problem solving focused and able to work under pressure.






    Thank you so much, ive been learning reading your posts!


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    Re: help is what i need

    Quote Originally Posted by hscadore View Post
    Hi all, I have been writing a resumé and I have had many doubts. Could you analyze these sentences and tell me whether they sound good and how I could improve them.


    Objective


    A job in a dynamic environment, which will offer me the opportunity to get in touch with different cultures, development of an international career and a global workplace experience.

    Profile

    - Good written and spoken English, and seeking to learn other languages. (I hope that it is true)
    - Professionally committed and responsible.
    - Able to deal with different kinds of people.
    - Focused, problem-solving and able to work under pressure.


    Thank you so much, I've been learning reading your posts!
    You have high aspirations - good luck!


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    Re: help is what i need

    Thank you Anglika! It is kind of you to help me. I'm looking for a change in the objective sentence:

    "A job in a dynamic environment, which will offer me the opportunity to get in touch with different cultures, and a global workplace experience."


    Is it righ and more concise than the previous version???

    Thank you so much again!


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    Re: help is what i need

    Certainly more concise. It is fine.


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    Re: help is what i need

    Great!

    thank you.

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