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    please correct my sentences

    She is always with him as if she is his girlfriend.

    He had sex with fourteen girls during last 5 months, he must have affected with HIV positive.

    Are these sentences correct?

    Please help me.


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    Re: please correct my sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by user_gary View Post
    She is always with him as if she is his girlfriend.

    He had sex with fourteen girls during last 5 months, he must have affected with HIV positive.

    Are these sentences correct?

    Please help me.
    Your first sentence leaves an impression that "she" is not his girlfriend. If sh is his girlfriend, then it should be "She is always with him as she is his girlfriend".

    Your second sentence is both grammatically and factually incorrect:

    "Over/during the last five months he has had sex with 14 girls, so he must be infected with an STD [sexually transmitted disease] by now."

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