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    Question Is my sentences correct?

    Please varify my sentences. (description based on pictures)

    1. The man with a cap and a round neck t-shirt, who is chopping the big fish on a wooden chopping board, is a fishmonger.

    2. The young lady who is the mother, is cutting the cake on the coffee table with a knife while sitting next to her husband on a sofa .

    3. The father is sitting and relaxing himself on a sofa near a pot of big plant while reading a story book.

    4. The man who wears a cap is walking while carrying a tray of drinks to serve his customers.


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    Re: Is my sentences correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by halirafi View Post
    Please varify my sentences. (description based on pictures)

    1. The man with a cap and a round neck t-shirt, who is chopping the big fish on a wooden chopping board, is a fishmonger.

    2. The young lady who is the mother, is cutting the cake on the coffee table with a knife while sitting next to her husband on a sofa .

    3. The father is sitting and relaxing himself on a sofa near a pot of big plant while reading a story book.

    4. The man who wears a cap is walking while carrying a tray of drinks to serve his customers.
    Hello and welcome to the forums.

    In #2 I would insert a comma after "lady"

    In #3, "relaxing" does not need anything after it; "a big pot plant"


    Otherwise they seem grammatical.


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    Re: Is my sentences correct?

    Oh, I see.
    Thank you very much.

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