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    sentence check...

    Every ounce of your milk is making a difference, 25% of the milk collected will go to Africa and 75% will stay in the US for critically ill infants in the Neonatal Intensive Care Unit.


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    Re: sentence check...

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    Every ounce of your milk is making a difference. 25% of the milk collected will go to Africa and 75% will stay in the US for critically ill infants in the Neonatal Intensive Care Unit.
    You need the full stop after "difference".

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