This is my second essay, comparision and contrast.
I don't worry much about the information (I'm still confuse after reading several times), but grammar.
So, I really need some help from you to help me correct grammars and sentence structures. (sorry if it's too ling )

If you don't understand what I'm talking about or my writing is real bad... pls tell me .. hehe

Thank you very much.. Kob Khun Kha..