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    • Join Date: Jul 2005
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    #1

    correct?

    Hi,

    could you please proofreed the following text:

    The Police are not aware of a US citizen being involved in the organized group of offenders. However, investigation of this criminal activity is still at the very beginning.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka


    • Join Date: Oct 2006
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    Re: correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Hanka View Post
    Hi,

    could you please proofreed the following text:

    The Police are not aware of a US citizen being involved in the organized group of offenders. However, the investigation of this criminal activity is still at the very beginning.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka

    It is basically ok. I would end the second sentence "is still in its early days".

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