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    #1

    is it correct?

    Hi,

    could you please check the following sentence? It is the conclusion of a letter.

    To this extent, I would like to supplement the original letter of request for legal assistance and again express my deep respect and assurance of the mutual effort to fight against this serious criminal activity.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka


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    Re: is it correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Hanka View Post
    Hi,

    could you please check the following sentence? It is the conclusion of a letter.

    To this extent, I would like to supplement the original letter of request for legal assistance and again express my deep respect and assurance of the mutual effort to fight against this serious criminal activity.

    Thank you very much.

    Hanka
    It's fine, but very formal.

    I would write this:

    I would like to reiterate what was said in my/our original request for legal assistance, and to again assure you of our continued support in the mutual fight against this serious criminal activity.

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