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    Letter

    Hello!
    I helped my roommate writing a letter. I am not sure if it's okay. Could someone please be so kind as to have a look an it and correct it? Thank you very much!

    And this is the letter:

    Four weeks ago we sent you the settlement of the horse "Fury". Unfortunately we falsely included 9% tax. We therefore have to ask you to be so kind as to transfer the sum of 300 back to our account. We want to offer our sincere apologies for that mistake.


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    Re: Letter

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    Hello!
    I helped my roommate writing a letter. I am not sure if it's okay. Could someone please be so kind as to have a look an it and correct it? Thank you very much!

    And this is the letter:

    Four weeks ago we sent you the settlement of the horse "Fury".[Do you mean "we sent you payment for ..."?] Unfortunately we falsely [erroneously/in error] included 9% tax. We therefore have to ask you to be so kind as to transfer the sum of 300 back to our account. We want to offer our sincere apologies for that mistake.
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