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    Red face please

    Can you please help me edit this sentence...

    For many years, biblical spectacles were a staple of the Hollywood film industry, however, in recent years, few such films have been produced.

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    Re: please

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    Can you please help me edit this sentence...

    For many years, biblical spectacles were a staple of the Hollywood film industry, however, in recent years, few such films have been produced.
    There is nothing wrong with the wording but the punctuation is wrong. You need a period or a semicolon after "industry". I would omit the two commas after "years" but some people might keep them.

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