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    What's wrong?

    Is the sentence below correct? if it's not, please tell me why. Thanks!

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    Re: What's wrong?

    You will receive inserts packaged in the correct order, please place them into the binder and make sure that all pages follow the order below:


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    Re: What's wrong?

    I would change the comma to a full stop and make this two sentences.

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