Some correction needed, but not bad.Hi everybody! I hope you're all right!
I think some people exterminate to the [delete - unnecessary] our world on purpose! Because they want to earn much money, get more power and exploit to the[delete] poor people that [because/since] they are weaker than them [delete - unnecessary]. But why? Our world is very big and very beautiful and much [delete]more enough for all us, isn't it? Now then, [So/Then] why do some people still keep their bad behaviour? Whenever I watch the news on T.V or look at the newspapers, I see a lot of bad things; for example hundreds killed,hundreds more wounded(children, mothers or fathers etc.),suicides,assassinations,earthquakes and [earthquakes are not man-made - delete] etc. What's happening? When will we say stop it? Or Who will say stop it?
I think that Life will say to us like that [delete] '' GET OUT OF MY FACE !!!''
I hope my grammer is correct!
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