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    Help Re-Writing A Sentence...

    Can someone help me with converting this to a more readable sentence?

    “KwikWork® reduced cycle times and 47 steps and 7 days duration to 2 steps and 5 minutes - which is paramount in our competitive marketplace.”

    THANKS SO MUCH!

    Gia

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    Re: Help Re-Writing A Sentence...

    Kwikwork slashed the 47 steps of a cycle to 2 and reduced the time required from 7 days to 5 minutes- an enormous improvement vital in a competitive market.

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