Student or Learner
here is a formal letter i wrote,so can you please help me doing the corrections????????
here it goes.
I am writting this letter in connection with the law mandating uniforms for NYC High School Students.
As per the idea of passing a law that mandates uniforms for NYC High Schools. I whole heartedly aprreciate and agree the act you are going to take.And here are some of my point of view on pros of school uniforms.I hope it will be helpful.
School Uniforms do alot of wholesome things such as it shows respect to each other and to the teachers as well.It gives a feeling of belongingness to a particular school. It also inhibit students
from wasting time,focusing in clothes. School Uniforms in other way saves money too.It helps to maintain school discipline and decrease fighting and voilence that arise out of arguments over fashionable clothes.
Like wise School Uniforms assist alot for the faculties,and environment of the school.
So i think Students should be given school uniforms in High Schools for their betterment and the society as a whole.Lastly i cease here by saying "School Uniforms gives a spirit of learning and should be mandate by the Law."