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    cover letter

    Could you check this cover letter for me,please,please, please?

    Dear Hiring Manager,


    I was excited to read about the position you advertised on Jobpilot website (XXX here comes reference number which I have to find:). Having spent abroad over three years I am able to fully understand practical problems encountered by those who decide to live in a foreign country as well as the issues stemming from finding oneself in different culture. My background as sociology graduate and a teacher supplied me with very good communication skills and ability to work under pressure, which seems particularly important in the job you offer. I am very well organized and, as can be seen from my educational path, I donít lack in ability and willingness to learn.
    I hope you will consider me for this position. I look forward to meeting with you and discussing my qualifications in more detail.

    Yours Sincerely,
    XXX

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    Re: cover letter

    Quote Originally Posted by magdalena View Post
    Could you check this cover letter for me,please,please, please? See the corrections in red.

    Dear Hiring Manager,


    I was excited to read about the position you advertised on Jobpilot website (XXX here comes reference number which I have to find:). Having spent more than three years abroad, I am able to fully understand the practical problems encountered by those who decide to live in a foreign country as well as the issues stemming from finding oneself in a different culture. My background as a sociology graduate and a teacher supplied me with very good communication skills and the ability to work under pressure, which seem particularly important in the job you offer. I am very well organized and, as can be seen from my educational path, I donít lack in ability and willingness to learn.
    I hope you will consider me for this position. I look forward to meeting with you and discussing my qualifications in more detail.

    Yours Sincerely,
    XXX
    See the corrections in red.

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