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    Hi there,
    Can you proofread the following sentences?

    1. It is a piece of well-planned essay.
    2. All the solutions required are mentioned in your essay OR ... are there.
    3. Grammar mistakes are the blocking step. Work hard on grammar.

    pete


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    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    Hi there,
    Can you proofread the following sentences?

    1. It is a piece of well-planned essay. This would imply only a small part of the essay. "It is an example of a well-planned essay" OR "It is a well-planned essay".
    2. All the solutions required are mentioned in your essay OR ... are there. "can be found" is another way to say this. "are mentioned" is better then "are there".
    3. Grammar mistakes are the blocking step. Work hard on grammar. "Grammar mistakes are your stumbling block. Work hard on your grammar."

    pete
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