I'd use 'when' rather than 'while' or 'on'. :D
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#1 13-May-2003, 15:11while
Are these sentences correct:
1-His attitude while coming into the room was one of defiance, but his attitude while leaving the room will be one of submission.
2-His attitude while he was coming into the room was one of defiance, but his attitude while he will be leaving the room will be one of submission.
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#2 13-May-2003, 17:16Re: while
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#3 13-May-2003, 17:30Re: while
I agree with TDOL. For the second sentence I would make it when he leaves the room.
Originally Posted by navi tasan
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